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As Swift As The Wind

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I thank kouriiko for fixing some things
And Candid for coming up with a title because I suck at titles..

Its 4am, I can finally sleep horray!
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This is a critique I'm not trying to be mean this is simply what I think about this art piece, I love your art to be honest but uh, here goes

The front legs seem oddly positioned, such as the right is shorter than the left because it appears to be stretching all the way, it also appears to be coming from a higher place off the body. The right front limb is rather short and the joints don't seem to be in the right spots

I love what you had done with the back legs, the style and the position of them is very well done, as well as the face.

With the face I would only suggest the eye maybe not be so blurred, as the fox appears blind (unless if it is then well done or if it just has a really light eye color) The face has a nice style, the ears are rather odd to me just because of the fur that comes up to the top but like I said, I'm guessing that's style and I really like it

The shading is nice, good job because honestly that's one of the many things I can't master

Lastly I'd like to comment on the fur and tail. On the fur it seems very straight, it begins on the chest going down in jagged lines then comes back from the belly. I suggest adding some curves and tufts to your piece. The tail has a very cutesy style and I honestly have nothing other to say about it

I'm not trying to be rude but this is a critique, and it is visually pleasing, but it is not very original (even if it was someone else's fox oc or yours I mean, a lot of people draw foxes) The technique/style is very nice, one of the reasons I followed you. This piece doesn't have too much of any emotional impact (I'm assuming that's what it means) but overall this is a pretty nice piece

I love your work and I can't wait to see you continue to improve, take care <3